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i.
her eyes
never land.

a scape claimed
no matter how sharp
her intake,
or the orbits
aligned by her will,
or the scope
of the aperture
filled.

lips fueled
and begging
to be ignited.


ii.
she can't fight it.

cracks in the visor
and pressure leaks.

a void
asking her hand
and her peace
as the tip
of her tongue
starts to freeze.

spidered sight
and face
like a shard
divided.


iii.
"if i have to be breathless,"
she finally states,
"i'd prefer it to be by the trident."
perhaps
the next dive
will have depth
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
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gliitchlord Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013   Writer
marvelous! i shall do all that right away.
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MariaTala Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
I love your league of legends poems you really captured each champion beautifully. :heart:
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013   Writer
I'm glad somebody likes them, haha. 

but this isn't one of them ;P
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MariaTala Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
Haha, really? I just assumed. Well atleast now you know. :]
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Writer
featured: [link] :heart:
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013   Writer
Love Bounce 
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linenandlicorice Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lips fueled
and begging
to be ignited
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   Writer
with no breath
invited
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
what a beautiful conclusion :heart:
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