literature

paper shredder

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Published: Nov 21, 2014

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Literature Text

let's not look, dear
back, ever

never our gazes
let graze
the past
dark

keep bright
our current sight
set on
the sun's

and our breath
keep
our lungs

v1.0

READERS
remix this poem!
imagine each of the 13 lines as a strip of paper.
rearrange the pieces to make a new poem
space as you desire

and i will feature the results in a journal soon

edit: i am always a fan of bending the rules so be bold

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your-methamphetamine

i did it first and i know it: shredded paper
the only way to be is bold.