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essences by gliitchlord essences by gliitchlord
of spirited away cities

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lol, instagram

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lol, DD!

That's one way to start a week :D

Thanks to ^Beccalicious and every deviant who drops by!

(comments/critiques extremely welcome. i will watch the heck out of you if you do so!)
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Given 2013-08-12
essences by =gliitchlord ( Featured by Beccalicious )
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This is definitely the most interesting poem I've read in quite some time. The words spill out with so much intrigue and encourage imagination without sticking too strictly to particulars- it's mysterious and captivating and I was fascinated to read it. Very unique use of every day words combined with the more striking side of vocabulary. The shape of it and the colors used, along with the font, all add to the draw-viewers-in factor. I absolutely love how instead of just typing up a poem and uploading it the traditional way, you chose to create this original layout. I really enjoyed looking at this deviation.:)
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Undomiel321 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Gah! I love how the well the shape and the pacing of this poem work together!
How do you do it? So frustrating. I want to do that, lol. Anyways, a well deserved DD. 
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner 6 days ago   Writer
i had a lot of fun with this one :D thank you!
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:iconparis-boy:
Paris-Boy Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
I‘m a new man
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013   Writer
:dance:
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:iconsavaliste:
Savaliste Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
:devart:Congratulations on your DD feature! Great Timing! :highfive:
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
:highfive:
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:iconsavaliste:
Savaliste Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
I meant great writing.. I also loved the style at which you displayed it :nod:
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:iconpurpleink777:
PurpleInk777 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
First of all, :iconcongratsdd1plz::iconcongratsdd2plz::iconcongratsdd3plz:! A work such as this is well-deserving of a DD!  :thumbsup:

A most interesting method of writing poetry! I love the typography! Simply jawdropping! :nod:

Be sure to keep up the good work! =D
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
thanks ever so much!

:highfive:
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:iconpurpleink777:
PurpleInk777 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
You're very welcome! :hug:

Thanks for the watchback! :la: :highfive:

Oh, and enjoy the llama! =D
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
:twitterpated: 
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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:iconkagenoneko-maat:
KageNoNeko-Maat Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Wow. :)
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
O_O 
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:iconkyafactor:
kyafactor Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Very intense imagery, and I love how the last few lines tie it all together. ^-^
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
gotta have the clincher, haha

thanks!
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:icondemoniquealma:
DemoniqueAlma Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I like it a lot it's a very beautiful view of things and you can understand the mystery and spiritual implications of it.
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
right on. thanks for the comment!
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:icondemoniquealma:
DemoniqueAlma Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Your very much welcomed.:D
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Hah. That is one amazing poem. I can actually comprehend it: we don't stop to look at things we don't understand, and thus don't ever understand them at all.
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
comprehension is in the mind of the reader. or something like that that makes sense.

glad you got something out of it!
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student General Artist
:rose:
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:iconsilverinkblot:
SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I might have called it "Susurration" :lol:
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
if i could, i'd submit a deviation with alternate titles.

i just really wanted the "ess" in there.

;D
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:iconrookanga1945:
Rookanga1945 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist
I like the alliteration, but in general I'm not a huge fan of poetry. Still, great job!
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
thanks for checking it out regardless.

:D
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:iconhastymage:
HastyMage Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:wow:
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
:jawdrop:
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:iconcliselle:
cliselle Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is wonderful, I'm reading it over and over and I still can't grasp how beautiful this is.
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
i'm glad it has some repeat appeal!

:heart:
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:iconcliselle:
cliselle Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, it does have a lot!
I was reading it and around the sixth time I read it, my cousin told me I was being annoying, haha.
Congratulations on the DD!
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
:glomp: remake 
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:iconayeaye12:
AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Writer
Great concrete poetry. Really like the sibilance in it, especially "spirits and screams / that are silent". :D
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
glad you enjoyed it!
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:icondreamer-of-magic:
Dreamer-of-Magic Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   General Artist
:wow: Wow.
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
:bow:
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:icondreamer-of-magic:
Dreamer-of-Magic Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   General Artist
:)
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:iconhazysunray:
HazySunray Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really nice. Just one thing: 'decieve'. It's supposed to be 'deceive'. I'm pretty sure it's just a typo. For the rest, I really love this poem. 
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gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
aww snap.

real talk: this is a photo taken with my phone of something written in notepad on a work computer, doused in instafilters. and i am terrible with ei/ie :D

but you're the first eagle eye to note it! thanks for not letting my flub rub you too wrong.
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:iconhazysunray:
HazySunray Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I totally get that ;) I have that with the apostrophe ALL the time x)
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:iconthescribbler12:
TheScribbler12 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student General Artist
This is just like...the "S" and the...the words and...the feeling....it's just like....it seems like...wow.
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gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
I had a lot of fun with it, haha.

thanks for checking it out!
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:iconthescribbler12:
TheScribbler12 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student General Artist

'Twas my pleasure!

 

And thank you for the watch, it was completely unnecessary but entirely appreciated!! ^^

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:iconbeltaneh:
Beltaneh Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Really well deserved DD

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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
aww, thank you!
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ComeSweetOblivion Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Utterly amazing! :)
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
oh shucks.

:thanks:
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:iconlostgryphin:
LostGryphin Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Congrats on the DD
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Writer
many thanks!
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