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eyes doed reflect
back's hold of knives

wide, white, and whys
inside dismissive sighs

from complete investment
to depleted thighs

a lack so immense
light nor love survives
oh dear,
we're falling
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AyeAye12's avatar
Great stuff, but the word"doed" snagged me a little. I'm guessing it means to get high/ be high? o__O Even then, it reads a bit strangley ad stalls the piece's flow.

That's just the first two lines, of course, the rest is brilliant :3