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March 16, 2009
The charming Addendum by ~skerd22 as the suggester notes, is a rather mesmerizing and intriguing piece. It also has an interesting flow and tone.
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Do you have any clue how
mesmerizing
you remain?

You're a cryogenic
heart
attack
{encased in flame}
and laced with memory's sweetest secret name

spoken

and winding
icily
down the same


backbone that you freeze
with a fireburn hum;

to feel you breathe
upon my xiphisternum

is like a dream from heaven above

wrapped in an

aquamarine
     pillar
       of
    flame;

"I am so in love with you"
becomes preferred refrain.

(There's something stuck in my head:
it's you and I.)

We cannot be the same,
for we have witnessed
candlelit displays
of come what may;

I will follow you
into the cold of daybreak
painted in shades of

midnight blues
and
velvet grays;

an instant in space
burns brighter than the jealous sun;
meteor showers keep us for hours
until our fears are undone.

[pardon my wandering erratic mind]
[but that moment rests upon a pedestal within the halls of time]
[and Rembrandt's strokes fail to properly describe]
[the furnace depths that rest behind your frozen lake visage]
[that I can't help but ache to kiss]

I exhale
vapors
after taking time to warm your lips

that once purred with unsure frost;
now entwined fingers
cross hearts: a promise
to be lost

wholeheartedly

in thoughts of we;


Let us paint the music;

with your permission I elect to never leave.
For those of you who don't have my poems engraved into your brain (I'm going to assume that's everyone), it would be nice for me to mention that this poem is a collection of ideas from many of my favorite works.

Self-referential, if you will.

Some are more heavily referenced than others, of course...


Previous Poems Referenced
(in no particular order)

11. Memory - [link]

8. Innocence - [link]

7. Heaven - [link]

67. Playing the Melody - [link]

72. Mischief Managed - [link]

39. Hold My Hand - [link]

Backbone - [link]

52. Deep In Thought - [link]

19. Gray - [link]

42. Standing Still - [link]

36. Precious Treasure - [link]

15. Silence - [link]

Preconceptions - [link]

Atmosphere - [link]

80. Words - [link]

Cliche - [link]

Sense - [link]

Light - [link]

Collide - [link]

Amidst - [link]

We Are - [link]

Lost - [link]

To The Days - [link]
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